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kerithedorkette
K (beginner)
Number of posts: 8
Age: 16
Location: Burleson♥♥♥
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Registration date: 2008-10-29
 |  Subject: Poems Wed Oct 29, 2008 7:49 pm | |
| This is a poem about how everyone at one point in their life will feel, you feel that someone else has it better than you, and that everything will just get worse and never better, so here is a poem to help you think of it in a more natural way, idk what i am trying to say, but i hope y'all like it xx Country MagicThe country winds blowing so effortlessly,
meandering without any care,
the sun pressing against me so tenderly,
being pushed back, its hard to capture this free air.
Jealous of the free flowers,
blooming with beautiful petals,
trapped in the hedges,
I'm prisoned by the nettles.
Desperate for freedom,
the trees show off their brave stance,
how i wish to have the country freedom,
will i ever get this magical chance.?  xx, Keri |
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Vikki
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Number of posts: 2240
Age: 18
Location: UK
Points: 1687
Reputation: 2
Registration date: 2008-09-19
| | Subject: Re: Poems Wed Oct 29, 2008 7:57 pm | |
| wow sis , grt job . i loves it, i love the flow of it and i love it's descriptive words.and it has beauty in the emotion it carries throughout. grt job  |
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ericb
KELLY
Number of posts: 1516
Points: 1274
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Registration date: 2008-08-07
| | Subject: Re: Poems Wed Oct 29, 2008 7:58 pm | |
| Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Keri.Welcom to kl.That's an incredible poem.God bless,and please,post here often.  |
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kerithedorkette
K (beginner)
Number of posts: 8
Age: 16
Location: Burleson♥♥♥
Points: 0
Reputation: 0
Registration date: 2008-10-29
| | Subject: Re: Poems Wed Oct 29, 2008 8:05 pm | |
| Thanky'all so much, i have another few, hopefully y'all like them, i have never been a good writer, but hopefully i improve, haha lol xx, |
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Vikki
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Number of posts: 2240
Age: 18
Location: UK
Points: 1687
Reputation: 2
Registration date: 2008-09-19
| | Subject: Re: Poems Wed Oct 29, 2008 8:07 pm | |
| dont' fib sis haha that poem we wrote together that time was alrite lmao. i'm sure we will like them. ur very welcome lol |
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kelly1st
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Number of posts: 1020
Age: 19
Points: 2147483647
Reputation: 3
Registration date: 2007-12-13
| | Subject: Re: Poems Thu Oct 30, 2008 12:44 pm | |
| awesome!!!! great job!! good to know that there's another poem here lol anyway glad to meet you,but...are you vik's sis?? _________________ I simply adore Kelly Clarkson  |
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kerithedorkette
K (beginner)
Number of posts: 8
Age: 16
Location: Burleson♥♥♥
Points: 0
Reputation: 0
Registration date: 2008-10-29
| | Subject: Re: Poems Thu Oct 30, 2008 10:30 pm | |
| Heyy, yeah sure Nice to meet you too, =) Yepp, Vikki and i sure are sisters, we are Kelly sisters, =) :D, we may just be the dorkiest people you know now, lol Yeah sis, we done good on that other poem, i like that one, , haha xx, Keri ! x |
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Vikki
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Number of posts: 2240
Age: 18
Location: UK
Points: 1687
Reputation: 2
Registration date: 2008-09-19
| | Subject: Re: Poems Thu Oct 30, 2008 10:31 pm | |
| haha lol well yeah it was alrite lol haha dorkiest people haha |
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kelly1st
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Number of posts: 1020
Age: 19
Points: 2147483647
Reputation: 3
Registration date: 2007-12-13
| | Subject: Re: Poems Fri Oct 31, 2008 1:00 pm | |
| come on dont play with my mind,are u real sisters or just Kelly sisters?? and yeah you might be one of the dorkiest people around,but I know someone with more dorky skills than you and that someone is ME  _________________ I simply adore Kelly Clarkson |
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Vikki
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Number of posts: 2240
Age: 18
Location: UK
Points: 1687
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Registration date: 2008-09-19
| | Subject: Re: Poems Fri Oct 31, 2008 2:45 pm | |
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kelly1st
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Number of posts: 1020
Age: 19
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Registration date: 2007-12-13
| | Subject: Re: Poems Fri Oct 31, 2008 3:07 pm | |
| I swear,I may look a bit calm,but you dont wanna see the dorky me. _________________ I simply adore Kelly Clarkson |
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Vikki
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Number of posts: 2240
Age: 18
Location: UK
Points: 1687
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Registration date: 2008-09-19
| | Subject: Re: Poems Fri Oct 31, 2008 10:13 pm | |
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kelly1st
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| | Subject: Re: Poems Sat Nov 01, 2008 5:59 pm | |
| yeah when I go crazy you better hide lol _________________ I simply adore Kelly Clarkson |
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Vikki
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Number of posts: 2240
Age: 18
Location: UK
Points: 1687
Reputation: 2
Registration date: 2008-09-19
| | Subject: Re: Poems Sat Nov 01, 2008 6:08 pm | |
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kelly1st
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Number of posts: 1020
Age: 19
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Registration date: 2007-12-13
| | Subject: Re: Poems Sat Nov 01, 2008 6:12 pm | |
| haha cool _________________ I simply adore Kelly Clarkson |
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