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PostSubject: An old song of mine but I like it :)   Mon Dec 15, 2008 3:27 pm

He sat down all alone in his room
Thinking of his lost love
He suddenly moved his eyes
To her picture above

He wanted to hug her
But she wasn’t here
He wanted to hold her in his arms
But she wasn’t near

she sat down all alone in her room
Thinking of her lost love
she suddenly moved her eyes
To his picture above

She wanted him to hug her
But he wasn’t here
She wanted him to hold her in his arms
But he wasn’t near

He catched up the phone and dialed her number
She catched up the phone and dialed his number
They called each other in the same time
So the line was busy
He thought she’s talking to her new love
She also thought the same
He kissed her pic and cried for his lost love
She kissed his pic and cried for her lost love
They said together in the same time
“A true love, never throw it behind
cuz when you lose it, you’ll never get it back
and you’ll regret it, for the rest of your life
yeah you’re gonna regret it, for the rest of your life”

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PostSubject: Re: An old song of mine but I like it :)   Mon Dec 15, 2008 11:34 pm

that is really good...its got a great flow with rhyming couplets...nice emotion....good reptitiveness..lovely wording...good job..SmileSmile
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PostSubject: Re: An old song of mine but I like it :)   Wed Dec 17, 2008 6:01 pm

lol thank you so much girl!!

btw it's a true story,but I made it as a song Smile

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PostSubject: Re: An old song of mine but I like it :)   Sun Dec 21, 2008 11:50 am

i saw that on ur myspace! i luv it girl! im making it into a song for u rite now, and the others too! Smile Smile. ily
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PostSubject: Re: An old song of mine but I like it :)   Sun Dec 21, 2008 2:12 pm

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!

cant wait!!!!

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PostSubject: Re: An old song of mine but I like it :)   Fri Jan 02, 2009 11:49 pm

looool....woop woop
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PostSubject: Re: An old song of mine but I like it :)   Wed Jan 07, 2009 2:08 pm

Love it yara,you're as talented and great as usual
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PostSubject: Re: An old song of mine but I like it :)   Mon Jan 12, 2009 2:09 pm

awwwwwwwww thanks lil

wont I ever read one of your songs??

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PostSubject: Re: An old song of mine but I like it :)   Fri Apr 10, 2009 3:19 pm

yara,I hope you will write more.alot more. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: An old song of mine but I like it :)   Mon Apr 13, 2009 1:30 pm

I will when I have the chance:) thanks Eric

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PostSubject: Re: An old song of mine but I like it :)   Wed Apr 15, 2009 12:42 pm

No need to thank me. Very Happy I'm only telling the truth.you're a great writer.
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PostSubject: Re: An old song of mine but I like it :)   Thu Apr 16, 2009 1:58 pm

well still thanks I appreciate it:)

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PostSubject: Re: An old song of mine but I like it :)   Mon Apr 20, 2009 5:33 pm

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PostSubject: Re: An old song of mine but I like it :)   Tue Apr 21, 2009 9:04 am

girl...sitting...thinking...and typing...lol

awww..i love it yara! Smile Smile Smile

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PostSubject: Re: An old song of mine but I like it :)   Tue Apr 21, 2009 12:46 pm

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