An old song of mine but I like it :)

He sat down all alone in his room
Thinking of his lost love
He suddenly moved his eyes
To her picture above

He wanted to hug her
But she wasn’t here
He wanted to hold her in his arms
But she wasn’t near

she sat down all alone in her room
Thinking of her lost love
she suddenly moved her eyes
To his picture above

She wanted him to hug her
But he wasn’t here
She wanted him to hold her in his arms
But he wasn’t near

He catched up the phone and dialed her number
She catched up the phone and dialed his number
They called each other in the same time
So the line was busy
He thought she’s talking to her new love
She also thought the same
He kissed her pic and cried for his lost love
She kissed his pic and cried for her lost love
They said together in the same time
“A true love, never throw it behind
cuz when you lose it, you’ll never get it back
and you’ll regret it, for the rest of your life
yeah you’re gonna regret it, for the rest of your life”

that is really good...its got a great flow with rhyming couplets...nice emotion....good reptitiveness..lovely wording...good job..

lol thank you so much girl!!

btw it's a true story,but I made it as a song

i saw that on ur myspace! i luv it girl! im making it into a song for u rite now, and the others too! . ily

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!

cant wait!!!!

looool....woop woop

Love it yara,you're as talented and great as usual

awwwwwwwww thanks lil

wont I ever read one of your songs??

yara,I hope you will write more.alot more.

I will when I have the chance:) thanks Eric

No need to thank me. I'm only telling the truth.you're a great writer.

well still thanks I appreciate it:)

once upon a time...there was a.......

girl...sitting...thinking...and typing...lol

awww..i love it yara!

the girl then....

reads the post above....

and likes to go off topic lol

because vikkki cant stay on one topic for one sec

haha i can

YARA IS A FABULOUS WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes she is.