fatchi K (beginner)
Number of posts : 5 Age : 30 Location : dancing,listenning to music,talking to friends Points : 15 Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2008-09-07
| Subject: A mother's sacrifice Fri May 08, 2009 10:20 am | |
| She was so young and so lovable She was so sweet and so adorable After two years of marriage she had a child Before you knew it, he was the only thing on her mind
She loved him from the bottom of her heart She gave him affection and love from the very start You could feel the joy in her eyes It was the beggining of a mother's sacrifice
When he got older she helped him get stronger Each and every day in his life He used to tell her that she is the best person in his life She became so happy when he told her that These words used to calm her whenever she was mad
She loved him from the bottom of her heart She gave him affection and love from the very start You could feel the joy in her eyes It was the next step of a mother's sacrifice
When he started his 20s, she was near the edge of 50s He told her that he wanted a wife and a family She was so happy when he said to the girl he loved:"MARRY ME" After the wedding, he kissed her goodbye She couldn't help it she had to cry
Days, weeks, months passed He didn't even approach to the doorstep She went asking about his health, with flowers in her hand He told her that he wanted to live alone She said:"I'm okay with that,but don't forget That i am your mother even if you don't admit it anymore"
She swallowed her pride, bit her toungue She was ready to go, acting like there's nothing wrong She turned to see him for the last time but the door was closed
She could feel the pain in her cheast She couldn't even take her breath She fell on the ground with his picture in her hand It was her bad and sad end
She loved him from the bottom of her heart She gave him affection and love from the very start But when he grew up, he torn her into pieces To see him everyday, that was what she needed I already said this twice But it was the end of a mother's sacrifice | |
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Vikki Admin
Number of posts : 2240 Age : 33 Location : UK Points : 1687 Reputation : 2 Registration date : 2008-09-19
| Subject: Re: A mother's sacrifice Sat May 09, 2009 4:50 am | |
| i love that, nice flow throughout,nice emotion, nice story told within the song. Good job, u have talent. | |
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kelly1st Admin
Number of posts : 1020 Age : 33 Points : 2147483647 Reputation : 3 Registration date : 2007-12-13
| Subject: Re: A mother's sacrifice Sat May 09, 2009 10:39 am | |
| awwwwwwww Fatchi its sooooooo great I really had tears while reading the last bit my relationship with my mom is not good but well your song girl is really really awesome its so touchy I really love it and i hope u post here more of ur songs:) awesome job | |
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