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fatchi
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PostSubject: A mother's sacrifice   A mother's sacrifice EmptyFri May 08, 2009 10:20 am

She was so young and so lovable
She was so sweet and so adorable
After two years of marriage she had a child
Before you knew it, he was the only thing on her mind

She loved him from the bottom of her heart
She gave him affection and love from the very start
You could feel the joy in her eyes
It was the beggining of a mother's sacrifice

When he got older she helped him get stronger
Each and every day in his life
He used to tell her that she is the best person in his life
She became so happy when he told her that
These words used to calm her whenever she was mad

She loved him from the bottom of her heart
She gave him affection and love from the very start
You could feel the joy in her eyes
It was the next step of a mother's sacrifice

When he started his 20s, she was near the edge of 50s
He told her that he wanted a wife and a family
She was so happy when he said to the girl he loved:"MARRY ME"
After the wedding, he kissed her goodbye
She couldn't help it she had to cry

Days, weeks, months passed
He didn't even approach to the doorstep
She went asking about his health, with flowers in her hand
He told her that he wanted to live alone
She said:"I'm okay with that,but don't forget
That i am your mother even if you don't admit it anymore"

She swallowed her pride, bit her toungue
She was ready to go, acting like there's nothing wrong
She turned to see him for the last time but the door was closed

She could feel the pain in her cheast
She couldn't even take her breath
She fell on the ground with his picture in her hand
It was her bad and sad end

She loved him from the bottom of her heart
She gave him affection and love from the very start
But when he grew up, he torn her into pieces
To see him everyday, that was what she needed
I already said this twice
But it was the end of a mother's sacrifice
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PostSubject: Re: A mother's sacrifice   A mother's sacrifice EmptySat May 09, 2009 4:50 am

i love that, nice flow throughout,nice emotion, nice story told within the song. Good job, u have talent.
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PostSubject: Re: A mother's sacrifice   A mother's sacrifice EmptySat May 09, 2009 10:39 am

awwwwwwww Fatchi its sooooooo great I really had tears while reading the last bit my relationship with my mom is not good but well your song girl is really really awesome its so touchy I really love it and i hope u post here more of ur songs:) awesome job
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