The day you died

Have you ever wondered how it feels like
To lose someone you care about and love?
Have you ever thought that a peacful night
Can change, and make your whole world stops?

I woke up and they told me that you were gone
I was shocked, and I stood there like a stone
It really hurts to know that I couldn't say goodbye
But the part that hurts the most,
Is that I won't be watching you sleep tonight.
I want you to know that you are always on my mind
And I shed a tear for you every once in a while

I was sleeping, while you were dying
You have never saw me crying
For you even thought you were ill
And now all alone I have to climb that hill

I woke up and they told me that you were gone
I was shocked, and I stood there like a stone
It really hurts to know that I couldn't say goodbye
But the part that hurts the most,
Is that I won't be watching you sleep tonight.
I want you to know that you are always on my mind
And I shed a tear for you every once in a while

I know that sometimes you were mad at me
And i am really sorry
I've never ment to make you cry
You'll always be in my mind until the day I die

I woke up and they told me that you were gone
I was shocked, and I stood there like a stone
It really hurts to know that I couldn't say goodbye
But the part that hurts the most,
Is that I won't be watching you sleep tonight.
I want you to know that you are always on my mind
And I shed a tear for you every once in a while

woah, thats brilliant, the emotion is just wow, thats great, goood job!.

awwwwwww Fatch this is sad:(

btw you have a good talent keep on writing i'll be happy to read more,you have talent,but u need to grrow it up.