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kerithedorkette K (beginner)
Number of posts : 8 Age : 31 Location : Burleson♥♥♥ Points : 0 Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2008-10-29
| Subject: Poems Wed Oct 29, 2008 1:49 pm | |
| This is a poem about how everyone at one point in their life will feel, you feel that someone else has it better than you, and that everything will just get worse and never better, so here is a poem to help you think of it in a more natural way, idk what i am trying to say, but i hope y'all like it xx Country MagicThe country winds blowing so effortlessly, meandering without any care, the sun pressing against me so tenderly, being pushed back, its hard to capture this free air.
Jealous of the free flowers, blooming with beautiful petals, trapped in the hedges, I'm prisoned by the nettles.
Desperate for freedom, the trees show off their brave stance, how i wish to have the country freedom, will i ever get this magical chance.? xx, Keri | |
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Vikki Admin
Number of posts : 2240 Age : 33 Location : UK Points : 1687 Reputation : 2 Registration date : 2008-09-19
| Subject: Re: Poems Wed Oct 29, 2008 1:57 pm | |
| wow sis , grt job . i loves it, i love the flow of it and i love it's descriptive words.and it has beauty in the emotion it carries throughout. grt job | |
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ericb KELLY
Number of posts : 1525 Points : 1283 Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2008-08-06
| Subject: Re: Poems Wed Oct 29, 2008 1:58 pm | |
| Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Keri.Welcom to kl.That's an incredible poem.God bless,and please,post here often. | |
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kerithedorkette K (beginner)
Number of posts : 8 Age : 31 Location : Burleson♥♥♥ Points : 0 Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2008-10-29
| Subject: Re: Poems Wed Oct 29, 2008 2:05 pm | |
| Thanky'all so much, i have another few, hopefully y'all like them, i have never been a good writer, but hopefully i improve, haha lol xx, | |
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Vikki Admin
Number of posts : 2240 Age : 33 Location : UK Points : 1687 Reputation : 2 Registration date : 2008-09-19
| Subject: Re: Poems Wed Oct 29, 2008 2:07 pm | |
| dont' fib sis haha that poem we wrote together that time was alrite lmao. i'm sure we will like them. ur very welcome lol | |
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kelly1st Admin
Number of posts : 1020 Age : 33 Points : 2147483647 Reputation : 3 Registration date : 2007-12-13
| Subject: Re: Poems Thu Oct 30, 2008 6:44 am | |
| awesome!!!! great job!! good to know that there's another poem here lol
anyway glad to meet you,but...are you vik's sis?? | |
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kerithedorkette K (beginner)
Number of posts : 8 Age : 31 Location : Burleson♥♥♥ Points : 0 Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2008-10-29
| Subject: Re: Poems Thu Oct 30, 2008 4:30 pm | |
| Heyy, yeah sure Nice to meet you too, =) Yepp, Vikki and i sure are sisters, we are Kelly sisters, =) :D, we may just be the dorkiest people you know now, lol Yeah sis, we done good on that other poem, i like that one, , haha xx, Keri ! x | |
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Vikki Admin
Number of posts : 2240 Age : 33 Location : UK Points : 1687 Reputation : 2 Registration date : 2008-09-19
| Subject: Re: Poems Thu Oct 30, 2008 4:31 pm | |
| haha lol well yeah it was alrite lol haha dorkiest people haha | |
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kelly1st Admin
Number of posts : 1020 Age : 33 Points : 2147483647 Reputation : 3 Registration date : 2007-12-13
| Subject: Re: Poems Fri Oct 31, 2008 7:00 am | |
| come on dont play with my mind,are u real sisters or just Kelly sisters?? and yeah you might be one of the dorkiest people around,but I know someone with more dorky skills than you and that someone is ME | |
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Vikki Admin
Number of posts : 2240 Age : 33 Location : UK Points : 1687 Reputation : 2 Registration date : 2008-09-19
| Subject: Re: Poems Fri Oct 31, 2008 8:45 am | |
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kelly1st Admin
Number of posts : 1020 Age : 33 Points : 2147483647 Reputation : 3 Registration date : 2007-12-13
| Subject: Re: Poems Fri Oct 31, 2008 9:07 am | |
| I swear,I may look a bit calm,but you dont wanna see the dorky me. | |
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Vikki Admin
Number of posts : 2240 Age : 33 Location : UK Points : 1687 Reputation : 2 Registration date : 2008-09-19
| Subject: Re: Poems Fri Oct 31, 2008 4:13 pm | |
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kelly1st Admin
Number of posts : 1020 Age : 33 Points : 2147483647 Reputation : 3 Registration date : 2007-12-13
| Subject: Re: Poems Sat Nov 01, 2008 11:59 am | |
| yeah when I go crazy you better hide lol | |
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Vikki Admin
Number of posts : 2240 Age : 33 Location : UK Points : 1687 Reputation : 2 Registration date : 2008-09-19
| Subject: Re: Poems Sat Nov 01, 2008 12:08 pm | |
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kelly1st Admin
Number of posts : 1020 Age : 33 Points : 2147483647 Reputation : 3 Registration date : 2007-12-13
| Subject: Re: Poems Sat Nov 01, 2008 12:12 pm | |
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Vikki Admin
Number of posts : 2240 Age : 33 Location : UK Points : 1687 Reputation : 2 Registration date : 2008-09-19
| Subject: Re: Poems Sat Nov 01, 2008 12:28 pm | |
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kelly1st Admin
Number of posts : 1020 Age : 33 Points : 2147483647 Reputation : 3 Registration date : 2007-12-13
| Subject: Re: Poems Mon Nov 03, 2008 8:11 am | |
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kerithedorkette K (beginner)
Number of posts : 8 Age : 31 Location : Burleson♥♥♥ Points : 0 Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2008-10-29
| Subject: Re: Poems Sat Nov 15, 2008 6:09 am | |
| Okay, New Poem Drama Queen*Typical drama queen, Yeah, you say thats what you've seen, or is it much more, are you afraid to unlock my door?
Afraid to let out what is true, you try to insure that my door is locked, is this to help me, or save you?
Does it scare you, that i have more ways to express myself? cause yeah i act, but i draw and i write too.
You should get used to the fact, that i am a drama queen, its in my nature to express myself and act, so be careful by what you say and what you mean. | |
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kelly1st Admin
Number of posts : 1020 Age : 33 Points : 2147483647 Reputation : 3 Registration date : 2007-12-13
| Subject: Re: Poems Sat Nov 15, 2008 8:49 am | |
| that is such a great poem girl,you are such a great drama queen,keep on being a great writer girl,that was so great... | |
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Vikki Admin
Number of posts : 2240 Age : 33 Location : UK Points : 1687 Reputation : 2 Registration date : 2008-09-19
| Subject: Re: Poems Sun Nov 16, 2008 12:03 am | |
| SIS , thats brilliant, i love it , u rock at writing and drawing , keep up the writing sis ur brill | |
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kerithedorkette K (beginner)
Number of posts : 8 Age : 31 Location : Burleson♥♥♥ Points : 0 Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2008-10-29
| Subject: KC* Sat Nov 22, 2008 5:53 am | |
| New Poem about Miss Clarkson herself... and a little about me combined... KC* Countless Supporters, Countless reasons, endless help.
What she needed, What seeps beneath us, Penetrating us, her every move.
What she once needed, did she seek? The answer still seeded, will she become waek?
Is she strong now? is she dusted? has she overcome, who she never trusted?
Will she overpower, the ghost that haunted her soul? or will she give in, and embed herself in the never returning hole?
The hole filled of regret and concern, cliffhangers and catches, let her be free, and continue her life's dispatches. | |
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Vikki Admin
Number of posts : 2240 Age : 33 Location : UK Points : 1687 Reputation : 2 Registration date : 2008-09-19
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kerithedorkette K (beginner)
Number of posts : 8 Age : 31 Location : Burleson♥♥♥ Points : 0 Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2008-10-29
| Subject: Re: Poems Sun Nov 23, 2008 12:06 pm | |
| thanks sis. :"), wasn't easy to put it up because it reveals so much, but i guess y'all might not really know what to analyze in this poem =) xx | |
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kelly1st Admin
Number of posts : 1020 Age : 33 Points : 2147483647 Reputation : 3 Registration date : 2007-12-13
| Subject: Re: Poems Mon Nov 24, 2008 4:05 am | |
| well I couldnt really understand what it talks about,I mean the reason for writing it like that but anyway if I wanna talk in general then sorry to say that I LOVE IT GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!! that was the best poem so far!!! Keep up ROCKING!!!!!!! | |
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